'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle"
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Resumo: | The purpose of this article is twofold: to present a new translation of William Shakespeare's poem “The Phoenix and the Turtle” alongside a discussion of formal and semantic solutions as well as to help filling the gap that exists in terms of translations of Shakespeare's lyrical poetry into Brazilian Portuguese, much smaller in number than those of the dramatic canon, except for the series of 154 sonnets (The Sonnets, 1609). It is a short poem, published in 1601 in a collection edited by Robert Chester under the title Love’s Martyr, which also includes authors such as Ben Jonson and George Chapman. In formal terms, it features 67 lines distributed in 13 quatrains and five triplets, to the latter making up the final part, the threnos. Written in trochaic tetrameter, it follows the rhyme scheme abba in the quatrains and aaa in the triplets. In an allegorical tone, it describes the ideal love between the phoenix and the turtle, which unites them into a single being, while preserving their own individualities. The poem begins with the gathering of some birds, such as crow, eagle and swan, to celebrate the memory of the phoenix and the turtle after their death. From the eleventh stanza on, Reason, personified, takes over the narrative, and sings a funereal lament for the love of the two birds: with their death, beauty, truth and grace disappear from the world. The translation presented here followed the method for the translation of poetry devised by Paulo Henriques Britto (2006, 2015), comprised of three steps: to identify the poetically significant characteristics of the poem; to assign a priority to each feature, depending on the greater or lesser contribution it makes to the overall aesthetic effect of the poem; and to recreate the characteristics considered to be the most significant among those for which correspondences can be sought in the target language. Replicating this method, the poem was recreated in eight-syllable lines, following the stanzaic structure and the rhyme scheme of Shakespeare’s poem. |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle"'Quem tem razão é o próprio amor': uma nova tradução brasileira de "The phoenix and the turtle", de William ShakespeareWilliam ShakespeareThe Phoenix and the TurtlePoetry translationWilliam ShakespeareThe Phoenix and the TurtleTradução de poesiaThe purpose of this article is twofold: to present a new translation of William Shakespeare's poem “The Phoenix and the Turtle” alongside a discussion of formal and semantic solutions as well as to help filling the gap that exists in terms of translations of Shakespeare's lyrical poetry into Brazilian Portuguese, much smaller in number than those of the dramatic canon, except for the series of 154 sonnets (The Sonnets, 1609). It is a short poem, published in 1601 in a collection edited by Robert Chester under the title Love’s Martyr, which also includes authors such as Ben Jonson and George Chapman. In formal terms, it features 67 lines distributed in 13 quatrains and five triplets, to the latter making up the final part, the threnos. Written in trochaic tetrameter, it follows the rhyme scheme abba in the quatrains and aaa in the triplets. In an allegorical tone, it describes the ideal love between the phoenix and the turtle, which unites them into a single being, while preserving their own individualities. The poem begins with the gathering of some birds, such as crow, eagle and swan, to celebrate the memory of the phoenix and the turtle after their death. From the eleventh stanza on, Reason, personified, takes over the narrative, and sings a funereal lament for the love of the two birds: with their death, beauty, truth and grace disappear from the world. The translation presented here followed the method for the translation of poetry devised by Paulo Henriques Britto (2006, 2015), comprised of three steps: to identify the poetically significant characteristics of the poem; to assign a priority to each feature, depending on the greater or lesser contribution it makes to the overall aesthetic effect of the poem; and to recreate the characteristics considered to be the most significant among those for which correspondences can be sought in the target language. Replicating this method, the poem was recreated in eight-syllable lines, following the stanzaic structure and the rhyme scheme of Shakespeare’s poem.Este artigo tem o duplo objetivo de apresentar uma nova tradução do poema de William Shakespeare “The Phoenix and the Turtle”, discutindo soluções formais e semânticas, e contribuir para a redução da lacuna que existe em termos de traduções da obra lírica do autor inglês para o português brasileiro, bem inferiores em número às do cânone dramático, exceção feita à série de 154 sonetos (The Sonnets, 1609). Trata-se de um poema curto, publicado em 1601, em uma coletânea reunida por Robert Chester sob o título Love’s Martyr, na qual também figuram autores como Ben Jonson e George Chapman. Em termos formais, o poema tem 67 versos distribuídos em 13 quadras e cinco tercetos, esses pertencentes à parte final, o threnos. Escrito em tetrâmetos trocaicos, a obra segue o esquema rímico abba nas quadras e aaa nos tercetos. Em tom alegórico, ela fala sobre o amor ideal entre a fênix e o pombo, que as une em um único ser, ao mesmo tempo em que preserva suas respectivas individualidades. O poema começa com a reunião de algumas aves, como corvo, águia e cisne, para relembrar a fênix e o pombo após a sua morte. A partir da décima-primeira estrofe, a Razão, personificada, assume a narrativa, e entoa um lamento fúnebre sobre o amor das duas aves: com a sua morte, a beleza, a verdade e a graça desaparecem do mundo. A tradução aqui proposta adotou a metodologia para a tradução de poemas desenvolvida por Paulo Henriques Britto (2006, 2015), composta de três etapas: a identificação das características poeticamente significativas do texto poético; a atribuição de uma prioridade a cada característica, dependendo da maior ou menor contribuição por ela dada ao efeito estético total do poema; e a recriação das características tidas como as mais significativas dentre aquelas para as quais se pode buscar correspondências na língua alvo. Seguindo esse roteiro, o poema foi recriado em octossílabos, replicando a estrofação e o esquema rímico dos versos shakespearianos.Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina2023-12-29info:eu-repo/semantics/articleinfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersionapplication/pdfhttps://periodicos.ufsc.br/index.php/traducao/article/view/9308510.5007/2175-7968.2023.e93085Cadernos de Tradução; Vol. 43 No. 1 (2023): Edição de Fluxo Contínuo; 1-21Cadernos de Tradução; Vol. 43 Núm. 1 (2023): Edição de Fluxo Contínuo; 1-21Cadernos de Tradução; v. 43 n. 1 (2023): Edição de Fluxo Contínuo; 1-212175-79681414-526Xreponame:Cadernos de Tradução (Florianópolis. 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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" 'Quem tem razão é o próprio amor': uma nova tradução brasileira de "The phoenix and the turtle", de William Shakespeare |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" Britto, Paulo Henriques William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Poetry translation William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Tradução de poesia |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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'Love Hath Reason, Reason None': A New Brazilian Portuguese Translation of William Shakespeare's "The Phoenix and the Turtle" |
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Britto, Paulo Henriques |
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Britto, Paulo Henriques Martins, Marcia Amaral Peixoto |
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Britto, Paulo Henriques Martins, Marcia Amaral Peixoto |
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William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Poetry translation William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Tradução de poesia |
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William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Poetry translation William Shakespeare The Phoenix and the Turtle Tradução de poesia |
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The purpose of this article is twofold: to present a new translation of William Shakespeare's poem “The Phoenix and the Turtle” alongside a discussion of formal and semantic solutions as well as to help filling the gap that exists in terms of translations of Shakespeare's lyrical poetry into Brazilian Portuguese, much smaller in number than those of the dramatic canon, except for the series of 154 sonnets (The Sonnets, 1609). It is a short poem, published in 1601 in a collection edited by Robert Chester under the title Love’s Martyr, which also includes authors such as Ben Jonson and George Chapman. In formal terms, it features 67 lines distributed in 13 quatrains and five triplets, to the latter making up the final part, the threnos. Written in trochaic tetrameter, it follows the rhyme scheme abba in the quatrains and aaa in the triplets. In an allegorical tone, it describes the ideal love between the phoenix and the turtle, which unites them into a single being, while preserving their own individualities. The poem begins with the gathering of some birds, such as crow, eagle and swan, to celebrate the memory of the phoenix and the turtle after their death. From the eleventh stanza on, Reason, personified, takes over the narrative, and sings a funereal lament for the love of the two birds: with their death, beauty, truth and grace disappear from the world. The translation presented here followed the method for the translation of poetry devised by Paulo Henriques Britto (2006, 2015), comprised of three steps: to identify the poetically significant characteristics of the poem; to assign a priority to each feature, depending on the greater or lesser contribution it makes to the overall aesthetic effect of the poem; and to recreate the characteristics considered to be the most significant among those for which correspondences can be sought in the target language. Replicating this method, the poem was recreated in eight-syllable lines, following the stanzaic structure and the rhyme scheme of Shakespeare’s poem. |
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