Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production

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Autor(a) principal: Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten
Data de Publicação: 1997
Tipo de documento: Dissertação
Idioma: eng
Título da fonte: Repositório Institucional da UFSC
Texto Completo: https://repositorio.ufsc.br/xmlui/handle/123456789/158115
Resumo: Dissertação (mestrado) - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina, Centro de Comunicação e Expressão
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spelling Universidade Federal de Santa CatarinaDellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho KuertenBohn, Hilario InacioTomitch, Leda Maria Braga2016-01-08T21:36:09Z2016-01-08T21:36:09Z1997108264https://repositorio.ufsc.br/xmlui/handle/123456789/158115Dissertação (mestrado) - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina, Centro de Comunicação e ExpressãoThe present study aimed at evaluating the performance of EFL intermediate students while revising texts using three revision strategies: individual revision, peer revision and revision based on the teacher's written feedback. The contribution of the changes introduced in revised texts as well as the students' attitudes and reactions toward the revising strategies were verified. Text production happened in two moments: the writing of a first draft of a text and its revision. Each revision strategy was used twice. Six classes were used for the writing of the first drafts of texts and other six for revising them according to the three revision strategies. In the last class, aiming at assesing the subjects' attitudes and reactions toward the revising strategies, an interview was carried out by the teacher. The research reveals that, according to the interviews, student-writers prefer feedback from a professional as opposed to any other kind of revision. Regarding the effect that the revision strategies had on subjects' subsequent versions, it seems that global aspects were more positively influenced by the teacher's feedback and by individual revisions respectively. Peer reviews also introduced textual changes, but on smaller scale. Superficial changes, such as mechanics and grammar, seemed to be peers' main concern.viii, 123f.| il., tabsengLingua inglesa -RetoricaRedaçãoEstudo e ensinoRevisao de textosWriting and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text productioninfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersioninfo:eu-repo/semantics/masterThesisreponame:Repositório Institucional da UFSCinstname:Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina (UFSC)instacron:UFSCinfo:eu-repo/semantics/openAccessORIGINAL108264.pdfapplication/pdf2230279https://repositorio.ufsc.br/bitstream/123456789/158115/1/108264.pdf11b1f4c7925e91290e71bcb05e516a8aMD51123456789/1581152016-01-08 19:36:09.484oai:repositorio.ufsc.br:123456789/158115Repositório de PublicaçõesPUBhttp://150.162.242.35/oai/requestopendoar:23732016-01-08T21:36:09Repositório Institucional da UFSC - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina (UFSC)false
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title Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
spellingShingle Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten
Lingua inglesa -
Retorica
Redação
Estudo e ensino
Revisao de textos
title_short Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
title_full Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
title_fullStr Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
title_full_unstemmed Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
title_sort Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
author Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten
author_facet Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten
author_role author
dc.contributor.pt_BR.fl_str_mv Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina
dc.contributor.author.fl_str_mv Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten
dc.contributor.advisor1.fl_str_mv Bohn, Hilario Inacio
dc.contributor.advisor-co1.fl_str_mv Tomitch, Leda Maria Braga
contributor_str_mv Bohn, Hilario Inacio
Tomitch, Leda Maria Braga
dc.subject.classification.pt_BR.fl_str_mv Lingua inglesa -
Retorica
Redação
Estudo e ensino
Revisao de textos
topic Lingua inglesa -
Retorica
Redação
Estudo e ensino
Revisao de textos
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