Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production
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Data de Publicação: | 1997 |
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Universidade Federal de Santa CatarinaDellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho KuertenBohn, Hilario InacioTomitch, Leda Maria Braga2016-01-08T21:36:09Z2016-01-08T21:36:09Z1997108264https://repositorio.ufsc.br/xmlui/handle/123456789/158115Dissertação (mestrado) - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina, Centro de Comunicação e ExpressãoThe present study aimed at evaluating the performance of EFL intermediate students while revising texts using three revision strategies: individual revision, peer revision and revision based on the teacher's written feedback. The contribution of the changes introduced in revised texts as well as the students' attitudes and reactions toward the revising strategies were verified. Text production happened in two moments: the writing of a first draft of a text and its revision. Each revision strategy was used twice. Six classes were used for the writing of the first drafts of texts and other six for revising them according to the three revision strategies. In the last class, aiming at assesing the subjects' attitudes and reactions toward the revising strategies, an interview was carried out by the teacher. The research reveals that, according to the interviews, student-writers prefer feedback from a professional as opposed to any other kind of revision. Regarding the effect that the revision strategies had on subjects' subsequent versions, it seems that global aspects were more positively influenced by the teacher's feedback and by individual revisions respectively. Peer reviews also introduced textual changes, but on smaller scale. Superficial changes, such as mechanics and grammar, seemed to be peers' main concern.viii, 123f.| il., tabsengLingua inglesa -RetoricaRedaçãoEstudo e ensinoRevisao de textosWriting and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text productioninfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersioninfo:eu-repo/semantics/masterThesisreponame:Repositório Institucional da UFSCinstname:Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina (UFSC)instacron:UFSCinfo:eu-repo/semantics/openAccessORIGINAL108264.pdfapplication/pdf2230279https://repositorio.ufsc.br/bitstream/123456789/158115/1/108264.pdf11b1f4c7925e91290e71bcb05e516a8aMD51123456789/1581152016-01-08 19:36:09.484oai:repositorio.ufsc.br:123456789/158115Repositório de PublicaçõesPUBhttp://150.162.242.35/oai/requestopendoar:23732016-01-08T21:36:09Repositório Institucional da UFSC - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina (UFSC)false |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten Lingua inglesa - Retorica Redação Estudo e ensino Revisao de textos |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Writing and revision : the effect of individual revision, peer revision and teacher's written feedback in foreign language text production |
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Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten |
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Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten |
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Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina |
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Dellagnelo, Adriana de Carvalho Kuerten |
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Bohn, Hilario Inacio |
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Tomitch, Leda Maria Braga |
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Bohn, Hilario Inacio Tomitch, Leda Maria Braga |
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Lingua inglesa - Retorica Redação Estudo e ensino Revisao de textos |
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Lingua inglesa - Retorica Redação Estudo e ensino Revisao de textos |
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Dissertação (mestrado) - Universidade Federal de Santa Catarina, Centro de Comunicação e Expressão |
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1997 |
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