Teacher’s mediation in High School student’ text revising and rewriting

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Autor(a) principal: Gasparotto, Denise Moreira
Data de Publicação: 2013
Outros Autores: Menegassi, Renilson José
Tipo de documento: Artigo
Idioma: por
Título da fonte: Calidoscópio (Online)
Texto Completo: https://revistas.unisinos.br/index.php/calidoscopio/article/view/cld.2013.111.04
Resumo: Writing is a task developed in several processes which involve stages that range from the first ideas to the final version of a text. That way, revising and rewriting, essential steps for text writing, reveal the analytic eye for the produced text, in order to adapt its structure and content to reader’s better understanding, maintaining the enunciator’s communicative aim. In the school context, these stages are dialogic processes that show oral or written interaction between student/enunciator and teacher/reader/reviser. The student’s responsive attitude can, therefore, provide the recognition of implicit processes concerning writing, among them: the teacher’s choices when leaving remarks on the student’s text and the student’s rewriting choices when holding there vised text. Based on theoretical assumptions of Bakhtin and his circle, concerning dialogism in written discourse, we analysed, in this paper, a high school teacher’s way of participation, through written correction, in the revising and rewriting processes of his students’ texts. The results were obtained by means of the access to the student’s texts and interviews with the teacher. It could be verified the teacher’s interest in explaining his remarks, which motivated the use of both textual notes and resolutive correction. It was also noticed little theoretical knowledge about written revising, however, the teacher showed conscious interest in improving his way of revising, which could be checked in the textual notes left on the text that was corrected after the interview.Key words: revising, rewriting, high school, dialogism.
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spelling Teacher’s mediation in High School student’ text revising and rewritingA mediação do professor na revisão e reescrita de textos de aluno de Ensino MédioWriting is a task developed in several processes which involve stages that range from the first ideas to the final version of a text. That way, revising and rewriting, essential steps for text writing, reveal the analytic eye for the produced text, in order to adapt its structure and content to reader’s better understanding, maintaining the enunciator’s communicative aim. In the school context, these stages are dialogic processes that show oral or written interaction between student/enunciator and teacher/reader/reviser. The student’s responsive attitude can, therefore, provide the recognition of implicit processes concerning writing, among them: the teacher’s choices when leaving remarks on the student’s text and the student’s rewriting choices when holding there vised text. Based on theoretical assumptions of Bakhtin and his circle, concerning dialogism in written discourse, we analysed, in this paper, a high school teacher’s way of participation, through written correction, in the revising and rewriting processes of his students’ texts. The results were obtained by means of the access to the student’s texts and interviews with the teacher. It could be verified the teacher’s interest in explaining his remarks, which motivated the use of both textual notes and resolutive correction. It was also noticed little theoretical knowledge about written revising, however, the teacher showed conscious interest in improving his way of revising, which could be checked in the textual notes left on the text that was corrected after the interview.Key words: revising, rewriting, high school, dialogism.A escrita é um trabalho que se desenvolve em diversos processos que envolvem desde o plano das ideias até a versão final de um texto. Dessa forma, a revisão e a reescrita textual, etapas fundamentais para a construção textual, revelam o olhar analítico sobre o texto construído, a fim de adequar sua estrutura e conteúdo à maior compreensão do leitor, mantendo o objetivo comunicativo do enunciador. No contexto escolar, essas etapas são processos dialógicos que marcam a interação, oral ou escrita, entre aluno/enunciador e professor/leitor/revisor. A atitude responsiva do aluno mediante a reescrita pode, assim, proporcionar a constatação de processos implícitos concernentes à escrita; entre eles, as escolhas do professor ao tecer comentários no texto do aluno e as escolhas de reescrita do aluno em posse de seu texto revisado. Ancorados nos pressupostos teóricos de Bakhtin e de seu Círculo, no tocante ao dialogismo no discurso escrito, analisamos, neste trabalho, os modos de participação, por meio da correção escrita, de um professorde Ensino Médio, na revisão e reescrita de textos de um de seus alunos. Os resultados foram obtidos pelo acesso às produções do aluno e por meio de entrevista com o professor. Verificou-se, assim, uma preocupação do professor em esclarecer seus apontamentos, o que o fez utilizar ora bilhetes textuais, ora correções resolutivas. Constatou-se, ainda, pouco conhecimento teórico acerca da revisão escrita, porém interesse consciente em aprimorar sua forma de revisar, o que se notou nos apontamentos feitos no texto corrigido após a realização da entrevista.Palavras-chave: revisão, reescrita, ensino médio, dialogismo.Unisinos2013-03-26info:eu-repo/semantics/articleinfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersionapplication/pdfhttps://revistas.unisinos.br/index.php/calidoscopio/article/view/cld.2013.111.04Calidoscópio; Vol. 11 No. 1 (2013): January/April; 29-43Calidoscópio; v. 11 n. 1 (2013): Janeiro/Abril; 29-432177-6202reponame:Calidoscópio (Online)instname:Universidade do Vale do Rio dos Sinos (UNISINOS)instacron:Unisinosporhttps://revistas.unisinos.br/index.php/calidoscopio/article/view/cld.2013.111.04/1421Gasparotto, Denise MoreiraMenegassi, Renilson Joséinfo:eu-repo/semantics/openAccess2013-04-30T20:43:55Zoai:ojs2.revistas.unisinos.br:article/3282Revistahttps://revistas.unisinos.br/index.php/calidoscopioPUBhttps://revistas.unisinos.br/index.php/calidoscopio/oaicmira@unisinos.br || cmira@unisinos.br2177-62022177-6202opendoar:2013-04-30T20:43:55Calidoscópio (Online) - Universidade do Vale do Rio dos Sinos (UNISINOS)false
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A mediação do professor na revisão e reescrita de textos de aluno de Ensino Médio
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Gasparotto, Denise Moreira
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Menegassi, Renilson José
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description Writing is a task developed in several processes which involve stages that range from the first ideas to the final version of a text. That way, revising and rewriting, essential steps for text writing, reveal the analytic eye for the produced text, in order to adapt its structure and content to reader’s better understanding, maintaining the enunciator’s communicative aim. In the school context, these stages are dialogic processes that show oral or written interaction between student/enunciator and teacher/reader/reviser. The student’s responsive attitude can, therefore, provide the recognition of implicit processes concerning writing, among them: the teacher’s choices when leaving remarks on the student’s text and the student’s rewriting choices when holding there vised text. Based on theoretical assumptions of Bakhtin and his circle, concerning dialogism in written discourse, we analysed, in this paper, a high school teacher’s way of participation, through written correction, in the revising and rewriting processes of his students’ texts. The results were obtained by means of the access to the student’s texts and interviews with the teacher. It could be verified the teacher’s interest in explaining his remarks, which motivated the use of both textual notes and resolutive correction. It was also noticed little theoretical knowledge about written revising, however, the teacher showed conscious interest in improving his way of revising, which could be checked in the textual notes left on the text that was corrected after the interview.Key words: revising, rewriting, high school, dialogism.
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