RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM

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Autor(a) principal: Dell'Isola, Regina Lúcia Péret
Data de Publicação: 2015
Outros Autores: Tosatti, Natália Moreira
Tipo de documento: Artigo
Idioma: por
Título da fonte: Gragoatá
Texto Completo: https://periodicos.uff.br/gragoata/article/view/33310
Resumo: In this article we will present the research result in which it was investigated the execution of a specific task by examinees taking Celpe-Bras who were being tested to prove their proficiency level in Brazilian Portuguese. Based on Swales's theory (1994, 1998) and in the genre conception as a social action proposed by Bazerman (1994, 2005), readers' letters produced by the examinees taking Celpe-Bras were analyzed. When performing task IV, which consisted of reading a report from a Brazilian periodical and writing a text to be published in the readers' letters section of the same medium, it was observed a diversity in the discursive written production. Aiming at assessing the quality of the written production, the rhetorical movements of each text produced were analyzed and these examinees' level of discursive linguistic knowledge was assessed. It was noted that, in the heading section, the examinees opted for different ways of opening the letter in which a variety of formality levels is observed. In the development of the letter, many opted for contextualizing followed by questioning the arguments presented in the base-text and defending a point of view. Even presenting different levels of proficiency, there was great concern in all the letters in our corpus to answer the command in the task heading. However, in the closing section, it was noted that in many letters the examinees ended their texts without presenting a proper closing as it would be expected in this genre. Practically all the productions presented problems with discursive coherence, having different levels of formality been used in the heading and closing. It was checked, in only a few letters, coherence in the three rhetorical movements, or three sections (heading, development and closing).
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spelling RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAMMOVIMENTOS RETÓRICOS EM PRODUÇÕES ESCRITAS NO EXAME CELPE-BRASwritingtextual genrerhetoric.ProficiênciaPortuguês Língua EstrangeiraIn this article we will present the research result in which it was investigated the execution of a specific task by examinees taking Celpe-Bras who were being tested to prove their proficiency level in Brazilian Portuguese. Based on Swales's theory (1994, 1998) and in the genre conception as a social action proposed by Bazerman (1994, 2005), readers' letters produced by the examinees taking Celpe-Bras were analyzed. When performing task IV, which consisted of reading a report from a Brazilian periodical and writing a text to be published in the readers' letters section of the same medium, it was observed a diversity in the discursive written production. Aiming at assessing the quality of the written production, the rhetorical movements of each text produced were analyzed and these examinees' level of discursive linguistic knowledge was assessed. It was noted that, in the heading section, the examinees opted for different ways of opening the letter in which a variety of formality levels is observed. In the development of the letter, many opted for contextualizing followed by questioning the arguments presented in the base-text and defending a point of view. Even presenting different levels of proficiency, there was great concern in all the letters in our corpus to answer the command in the task heading. However, in the closing section, it was noted that in many letters the examinees ended their texts without presenting a proper closing as it would be expected in this genre. Practically all the productions presented problems with discursive coherence, having different levels of formality been used in the heading and closing. It was checked, in only a few letters, coherence in the three rhetorical movements, or three sections (heading, development and closing).Este artigo visa a apresentar resultado de pesquisa em que se investigou a execução de uma tarefa específica por meio da qual examinandos que prestaram o Celpe-Bras foram levados a comprovar seu nível de proficiência na variante brasileira da língua portuguesa. Com base na teoria de Swales (1994, 1998) e na concepção de gênero como ação social, tal como propôs Bazerman (1994, 2005), foram analisadas 35 cartas do leitor produzidas pelos examinandos da segunda aplicação do exame Celpe-Bras no ano de 2008.  Ao realizarem a tarefa IV que consistia em ler uma reportagem da revista “Istoé” e escrever um texto para ser publicado na seção de cartas do leitor da mesma revista, verificou-se diversidade de modos de produção discursiva. discursiva. Com a finalidade de avaliar a qualidade da produção escrita, foram analisados os movimentos retóricos de cada um dos textos produzidos e verificou-se o nível de conhecimento linguístico discursivo desses examinandos. Constatou-se que, na seção de contato, os examinandos optaram por diferentes formas de abertura em que se observa variedade de níveis de formalidade. No núcleo da carta, muitos optaram pela contextualização seguida de questionamento dos argumentos apresentados e da apresentação de ponto de vista favorável ao uso do telefone celular, em diferentes níveis de proficiência, mas houve uma preocupação geral em todas as cartas do nosso corpus em atender ao comando do enunciado da tarefa. Entretanto, na seção de fechamento, verificou-se que em 15 cartas os examinandos finalizaram com o encerramento, sem o desfecho. Dessas, constatamos que apenas em nove cartas cabia esse procedimento discursivo. Finalmente, em 20 cartas consta encerramento seguido de desfecho. Praticamente todas apresentaram problemas de coerência discursiva, tendo sido empregados diferentes níveis de formalidade entre a abertura e o desfecho. Em poucas cartas verificamos coerência entre os três movimentos retóricos, ou três seções (contato, núcleo e fechamento).Universidade Federal Fluminense2015-06-30info:eu-repo/semantics/articleinfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersionapplication/pdfhttps://periodicos.uff.br/gragoata/article/view/3331010.22409/gragoata.v20i38.33310Gragoatá; Vol. 20 No. 38 (2015): Language StudiesGragoatá; v. 20 n. 38 (2015): Estudos de Linguagem2358-41141413-907310.22409/gragoata.v20i38reponame:Gragoatáinstname:Universidade Federal Fluminense (UFF)instacron:UFFporhttps://periodicos.uff.br/gragoata/article/view/33310/19297Copyright (c) 2019 Gragoatáinfo:eu-repo/semantics/openAccessDell'Isola, Regina Lúcia PéretTosatti, Natália Moreira2019-08-23T11:04:49Zoai:ojs.pkp.sfu.ca:article/33310Revistahttps://periodicos.uff.br/gragoataPUBhttps://periodicos.uff.br/gragoata/oai||revistagragoata@gmail.com2358-41141413-9073opendoar:2019-08-23T11:04:49Gragoatá - Universidade Federal Fluminense (UFF)false
dc.title.none.fl_str_mv RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
MOVIMENTOS RETÓRICOS EM PRODUÇÕES ESCRITAS NO EXAME CELPE-BRAS
title RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
spellingShingle RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
Dell'Isola, Regina Lúcia Péret
writing
textual genre
rhetoric.
Proficiência
Português Língua Estrangeira
title_short RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
title_full RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
title_fullStr RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
title_full_unstemmed RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
title_sort RHETORICAL MOVEMENTS IN WRITTEN PRODUCTIONS ON THE CELPE-BRAS EXAM
author Dell'Isola, Regina Lúcia Péret
author_facet Dell'Isola, Regina Lúcia Péret
Tosatti, Natália Moreira
author_role author
author2 Tosatti, Natália Moreira
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dc.contributor.author.fl_str_mv Dell'Isola, Regina Lúcia Péret
Tosatti, Natália Moreira
dc.subject.por.fl_str_mv writing
textual genre
rhetoric.
Proficiência
Português Língua Estrangeira
topic writing
textual genre
rhetoric.
Proficiência
Português Língua Estrangeira
description In this article we will present the research result in which it was investigated the execution of a specific task by examinees taking Celpe-Bras who were being tested to prove their proficiency level in Brazilian Portuguese. Based on Swales's theory (1994, 1998) and in the genre conception as a social action proposed by Bazerman (1994, 2005), readers' letters produced by the examinees taking Celpe-Bras were analyzed. When performing task IV, which consisted of reading a report from a Brazilian periodical and writing a text to be published in the readers' letters section of the same medium, it was observed a diversity in the discursive written production. Aiming at assessing the quality of the written production, the rhetorical movements of each text produced were analyzed and these examinees' level of discursive linguistic knowledge was assessed. It was noted that, in the heading section, the examinees opted for different ways of opening the letter in which a variety of formality levels is observed. In the development of the letter, many opted for contextualizing followed by questioning the arguments presented in the base-text and defending a point of view. Even presenting different levels of proficiency, there was great concern in all the letters in our corpus to answer the command in the task heading. However, in the closing section, it was noted that in many letters the examinees ended their texts without presenting a proper closing as it would be expected in this genre. Practically all the productions presented problems with discursive coherence, having different levels of formality been used in the heading and closing. It was checked, in only a few letters, coherence in the three rhetorical movements, or three sections (heading, development and closing).
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